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Favorite thigs

oscar5511 — Wed, 26 Nov 2008 07:12:38 +0000

Favorite food

Food I don’t really know what is my Favorite food, I love food I like any food that test good, for example like pizza is one and condromber. I think that my favorite food is one of those two, but they are much more food but I’m too lazy to type. They have cheese and meat and the cheese and the meat go in so well tighter.

Favorite Animal

I like a lot of animal, that are thought and strong, like tiger run and hunt, corrodes stay and wait for the pray. They are taught and strong but that nit my favorite animal. My favorite animal is Hippo, cause it’s so fat and cult and look so huggable. I want hippo to be at my house and play with it every day before sleep.

Favorite Music

I like many type of music, but the type of music that I like the most is Heavy Metal. It’s wake me up while I lessens to its and I can listens to heavy metal all day long not even get board of it’s, some time when the radio station open the slow song I kind a of falling a sleep, so just go and lessen to the real music.

Favorite Movie

There’s many movie that I like, and most of them I like its all, I think that one of my favorite movie is Step brother, it’s funny and supper fun I watch it’s all and over again for about 10 time at less. I wish you have watched it before, if you didn’t you should I suggest.

What is happening tomorrow?

oscar5511 — Thu, 30 Oct 2008 07:13:32 +0000

It’s a Halloween day tomorrow; every one going to every one house and ring a door bell and ask “treaty treat” I think every one going to ware a stupid close

And have fun every where a round the world. In neighbor there hose and Kids will go and ask people a candy for some one who was kind they will give kids a lot of candy. And for some one who wasn’t kind they wouldn’t give the kids any things. And for adult every one going some where to party and drinking but some one will get wasted. I’m not sure where I’m going to morrow, I think I might come to our school or maybe I’m going to other school. So I wish every one going to have fun and don’t sleep too late and wish they have fun a lot.

My life

oscar5511 — Thu, 09 Oct 2008 06:42:08 +0000

Nearly all of my entire life, I lived in this wonderful island named Phuket. My neighbor hood is nice to me, every one that lived in Chalong know me because of my aunt. In my Soi there’s a lot of Dive Company and bar. When I was young I used to run on the bridge and have fun with my family nearly every day, but now I don’t want to run any more so I never spend time with my mom. My mom works at a shop called Hot Wave, It’s a custom-made wetsuit, it’s quite sheep. I like to stay at Chalong because I know many people around there, now my aunt bought me a bike so I can go some where far away from my house. Every night I sleep at Chalong and catch a ride on a school bus to school and back. I wish my mom let me ride my bike to school, but she said it’s too dangerous to drive to school because in the mooring every one drive fast to get to woke or drop there kids to school. I don’t like to do home work at my house because my mom like to check my home work all the time, but I like to do and my friends house, every day I need to be home before night if I take my bike out to some where. If I dint stay at my house for long time I will missed home.

Fernando was telling a stoy in Mr.james class

oscar5511 — Wed, 08 Oct 2008 07:09:05 +0000

Fernando was telling a story in Mr. James class. He told us that he was at cable, tried to air when he went up and he get scared then he try to let go of the rope then he twists his body to the left. When he crashes every one laugh at him and Oscar was the first one that helps him, Oscar got him out of the water. And Fernando though he bloke his knee he didn’t play cable for the rest of the day. When he got home he went to sleep, the next morning he woke up and he ask his mom “Mom can you drop me to hospital” Fernando said, they got to hospital and he went to check dose his knee bloke or not. The doctor said he did bloke his knee, he need to stay at the hospital for two or three night. He was on the bed then he cant fell his leg so he try to pie because he couldn’t walk to the toilet and he accidentally poop on him self then he try to clean his poop with tissue, and he accidentally pull the cable of then alarm on and the nurse came in. He was shy but good thing that the nurse didn’t see any things. When Fernando told us we were laugh so much and we couldn’t stop laugh for whole day.

My wonderful Famliy

oscar5511 — Mon, 29 Sep 2008 06:51:43 +0000

When I was young I lived in Pataya with my mom and dad. They have a diving company not so far away from the beach about 200m. Mom didn’t met dad until she finish school, she were at Bangkok doing worked. Then one of my mom friends Ood ask her too move to my dad diving shop. Then my dad asks my mom out, they were going so well and they have a baby named Oscar he is a very smart kids. Then they had a very big fight and they split apart. My mom brings me to Phuket and tries to open a dive shop, she has fiend named Ood she own that dive shop. Mom and Ood are good friends for so long they met each other in my dad shop to. I was one years and a hafe when my mom first open the shop at first there was no customer at all. But its get better after, at first in Chalong they don’t have any dive shop at all but after a few years. It’s like the best dive place that they can find a boat to go to some where. And my mom bought four house around there now I lived there but soon I will moved to shop where else.

Editing Required Oscar

Andrew — Mon, 22 Sep 2008 12:50:20 +0000

Hi Oscar, You wrote:

When I was young I lived in Patya with my mom and dad they have a diving company. Mom didn’t met dad until she finish school, and worked in my dad diving shop, they were going so well and they have a baby named Oscar he is a very smart kids. Then they had a very big fight and they split apart. [NPMy mom brings me to Phuket and tries to open a dive shop, she has fiend named Ood she own that dive shop. Mom and Ood are good friends for so long they met each other in my dad shop to. I was one years and a hafe when my mom first open the shop at first there was no customer at all. But its get better after, at first in Chalong they don’t have any dive shop at all but after a few years. It’s like the best dive place that they can find a boat to go to some where. And my mom bought four house around there now I lived there but soon I will moved to shop where else.

When I was young I lived in Patya with my mom and dad they have a diving company. – Runon sentence, spelling mistake

Mom didn’t met dad until she finish school, and worked in my dad diving shop, they were going so well and they have a baby named Oscar he is a very smart kids. – Runon sentence, tense, number agreement

My mom brings me to Phuket and tries to open a dive shop, she has fiend named Ood she own that dive shop. – Runon sentence, tense, spelling

Mom and Ood are good friends for so long they met each other in my dad shop to. – tense, complicated phrase

I was one years and a hafe when my mom first open the shop at first there was no customer at all. – spelling, tense, complicated phrase

But its get better after, at first in Chalong they don’t have any dive shop at all but after a few years. – runon sentense, number agreement

It’s like the best dive place that they can find a boat to go to some where. – too many prepositions

And my mom bought four house around there now I lived there but soon I will moved to shop where else. – number agreement, runon sentence, tense, complicated phrase

Don’t forget to include photos. These will help the readers to identify the characters in your narrative, you, your Mum, your Dad and Ood. Make these changes quickly because you have a lot of work to do.

Mr. Andrew

Phuket and Home

oscar5511 — Wed, 17 Sep 2008 06:47:15 +0000

Nearly all of my entire life, I have lived in this wonderful island named Phuket. My neighborhood is all nice to me. Everyone who lives in Chalong know me because of my aunt, in my soi there is a lot of Dive Company and bar. I when I was younger I used to run on the bridged and have fun with my family nearly every day, but now I don’t run any more, my mom worked at a shop called Hot Wave it’s a customs made wetsuit, it’s very sheep. I like to stay chlong because I know many people around there, now my aunt bought me a bike so I can go some where far away from my house. Every night I sleep at chlong and catch a ride on a school bus to school and back. I wish my mom let me ride my bike to school, but she said it’s too dangerous to drive to school because in the mooring every one drive fast to get to woke or drop there kids to school. I don’t like to do home work at my house because my mom like to check my home work all the time, but I like to do and my friends house, every day I need to be home before night if I take my bike out to some where. If I dint stay at my house for long I will missed my house.